357汉译英练习：低空经济与无人机（广西科技大学2025真题）
题目要求
背景：选自广西科技大学 2025 年 MTI 汉译英真题，围绕 2024 年全国两会首次写入《政府工作报告》的“低空经济”，以及无人机、eVTOL（电动垂直起降飞行器）制造与空域管理等前沿产业热点。
要求：
- 忠实原文，语言规范，准确传达政经与前沿工业术语；
- 注意逻辑衔接与非谓语/从句的化解（如“意味着……”、“标志着……”、“伴随……”）；
- 限时 50 - 60 分钟独立完成（手写或键盘录入均可），切勿预先查阅参考译文。
汉译英试题原文（共四段，624 字）
【第一段】
在今年早些时候的《政府工作报告》中，中国总理李强提到了培育新的经济增长引擎。值得特别一提的是，他提到了“低空经济”，这一表达让人联想到了“飞行汽车”，这对某些人来说可能看起来像是科幻小说里的情景。但在这一领域，中国的发展速度比大多数国家都要快。飞行汽车或电动垂直起降 (eVTOL)车辆的制造商己经获得了政府的批准。
【第二段】
这些车辆通常看起来像非常大的消费级无人机。有些设计为自动驾驶，不需要驾驶员操控。其中，由广东省亿航公司生产的 EH216-S 机型于 4 月获得中国民用航空局（CAAC) 颁发的“生产证书”，意味着该公司可以开始进行大规模生产。EH216-S 是世界上第一款获得此类监管批准的飞行汽车。
【第三段】
亿航在中国有竞争对手。总部位于上海的 AutoFlight 公司的电动垂直起降飞行器于 3月获得了中国民用航空局的“型号合格证”，标志着其产品设计获得批准。同样位于广东的小鹏汽车所生产的一款车型也正在进行型号认证。另一热门竞争者是御风未来 Vertaxi, 该品牌的电动垂直起降飞行器于 10 月进行了首飞。
【第四段】
中国在这个领域有两大优势。首先是该国在电动汽车技术方面的优势，其中一些是可以从汽车迁移应用到飞行汽车上的。此外，电池也尤为重要。电动垂直起降飞行器使用的电池必须轻巧且容量够大。而中国则是世界上最大的电池制造商。其中，领头羊宁德时代（CATL）正在努力应对飞行汽车带来的挑战。第二个优势是政府的积极支持。中国的目标是到 2025 年在珠江三角洲和长江三角洲等地区建立“低空经济示范区”。中国政府己经在考虑，一旦无人机和电动垂直起降飞行器真正起飞，该如何管理空域。com
我的译文
In the Government Work Report published earlier this year, Chinese premier Li Qiang mentioned to foster new engines of economic growth. He notably mentioned the “low-altitude economy”, which can remind us with the flying car, a scene that seems like only will appear in the science fictions. In fact, China’s progress in this field is much ahead of most of countries.
These vehicles are similar to a bigger consumer drone, and some of them are designed with autopilot, without driver’s controlling. For example, the EH216-S model, produced by Yihang in Guangdong province, got the production license from CAAC in April, allowing massive production for this company. It is the world’s first model to get regulatory permissions.
There are also competitors for Yihang in China. AutoFlight, which located at Shanghai, have got the “model qualification” from CAAC in March, which remarked that its design have been permitted. A model from Xiaopeng is also seeking for type approval. Another competitor is Vertaxi, which have made its maiden flight in October.
China has two main advantages in this field. Firstly, the technical advantage on EV can be transferred and applied to flyinng cars. Besides, battery is also of importance for eVTOLs. It requires the onboard battery to be powerful while being lightweight, and as the biggest battery manufacturer of the world, China can match these requirements. CATL, a leader among these producer are working on resloving the issues that the eVTOL brought. The second is the government’s support. China aims to build demomnstrating area in the Pearl River Delta and the Yangtze River Delta by 2025, and it has begin to consider the regulation of airspace if the drones and eVTOLs take off in the future.
批改反馈（Workbuddy · 2026-09-17）
总评：5.0 / 10（换算 357 真题 50 分制单篇汉译英约 25 / 50 分；篇章主干推进顺畅，maiden flight、transferred and applied 等亮点词翻译精准，但第一段漏译整句，且遭遇了主谓一致与动词形态的连环车祸）。
- 分项得分：忠实原文 6.0 / 10 ｜ 语言规范 3.5 / 10 ｜ 表达地道 5.0 / 10 ｜ 完整度 6.0 / 10
一、值得保持的亮点
- 关键专业表达抓得准：“首飞”准确译为
maiden flight（没有生造 first fly）；“迁移应用”准确使用了transferred and applied to。 - 长句断句意识较好：面对经贸长句，能够主动切分为小句，没有出现无标点恶性堆叠。
二、红色警报：语法硬伤清单（必须正视的严重失分点）
1. 主谓一致（动词单复数）大溃败（单篇错 5 处！）
| 处所 | 你的原文 | 错误诊断 | 考场绝对正确改法 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Para 3 | AutoFlight ... have got | 主语是单数公司名，助动词误用复数 have。 | AutoFlight ... has obtained / gained |
| Para 3 | its design have been permitted | 主语 design 是单数名词，谓语误用复数 have。 | its product design has received approval |
| Para 3 | Vertaxi, which have made | 主语 Vertaxi 是单数公司，定语从句动词误用复数。 | Vertaxi, which has made |
| Para 4 | CATL, a leader among these producer are working | ① 主语 CATL 是单数，谓语误用 are working；② these 后面名词漏加复数 producers。 | CATL, a leading manufacturer ... is working |
| Para 4 | it has begin to consider | 低级时态形态硬伤。助动词 has 后误接动词原形 begin。 | it has begun to consider |
CAUTION
警报原因剖析：这证明在翻译 600 字的大篇幅文章时，你的脑力带宽全被中英文词汇转换占满，对动词单复数与完成时形态的“后台语法监视器”彻底关闭了。考场交卷前，必须建立“专查动词谓语单复数”的物理动作！
2. 漏译（D 级致命失分）
- 第一段整句漏译：
- 原文：
飞行汽车或电动垂直起降 (eVTOL)车辆的制造商己经获得了政府的批准。 - 在你的译文中完全遗漏！
- 参考补全：
In fact, some Chinese manufacturers of flying cars, or electric vertical take-off and landing (eVTOL) aircraft, have already obtained government approval for production.
- 原文：
- 修饰限定成分漏译：
- “这对某些人来说” (
to some people / for some) 未译出； - “非常大的” (
massive / very large) 误译成了比较级bigger。
- “这对某些人来说” (
3. 词汇搭配与造词错误
| 处所 | 你的原文 | 问题诊断 | 考场标准表达 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Para 1 | mentioned to foster | 搭配错误。mention 不接动词不定式 to do。 | called for efforts to foster |
| Para 1 | remind us with the flying car | 搭配错误。提醒某人某事是 remind sb. OF sth.，绝非 with。 | a term reminiscent of flying cars / remind people of... |
| Para 1 | science fictions | 词性错误。科幻小说作为体裁是不可数名词。 | science fiction（不可加 s） |
| Para 1 | most of countries | 语法错误。加 of 必须有定冠词 the。 | most countries 或 most of the countries |
| Para 2 | massive production | 语域不符。“大规模生产”在工业界标准表达是 large-scale 或 mass production。 | large-scale production |
| Para 2 | regulatory permissions | 专业术语错误。“监管批准”是不可数术语。 | regulatory approval |
| Para 3 | model qualification | 错误生造词。航空器“型号合格证”是固定的行业适航术语。 | type certificate |
| Para 3 | which remarked that | 动词误用。remark 是口头评论，不能表示“标志着”。 | meaning that... / marking the approval... |
| Para 3 | seeking for type approval | 及物动词误加介词。seek 直接接宾语。 | seeking type approval（去掉 for） |
| Para 4 | technical advantage on EV | 介词误用。“在……方面的优势”应接 in。 | advantages in electric vehicle technology |
| Para 4 | the regulation of airspace | 术语不规范。“空域管理”固定专有名词。 | airspace management |
| Para 4 | demomnstrating area | 错别字 + 术语。拼写错误，且“示范区”为 demonstration area。 | demonstration areas |
三、考场高分示范参考译文（背诵对比）
In the Government Work Report published earlier this year, Chinese Premier Li Qiang called for efforts to foster new engines of economic growth. Notably, he highlighted “the low-altitude economy”, a term reminiscent of flying cars that seem to exist only in science fiction. In this sector, however, China has outpaced many other countries. In fact, some Chinese manufacturers of flying cars, or electric vertical take-off and landing (eVTOL) aircraft, have already obtained government approval for production.
These cars resemble massive consumer drones. Some are designed to operate autonomously, without the need for human pilots. For example, the EH216-S model manufactured by Guangdong-based EHang obtained a production license from the Civil Aviation Administration of China in April, allowing it to begin large-scale production. In fact, the EH216-S is the world’s first flying vehicle that received regulatory approval.
EHang is not without competition in China. AutoFlight, headquartered in Shanghai, gained a type certificate for its eVTOL aircraft this March, meaning that its product design has received official approval. In addition, Xiaopeng Motors in Guangdong is seeking type approval for its model of flying cars. Another strong competitor is Vertaxi whose flying vehicle made its maiden flight in October.
China stands out for two notable advantages in this sector. First, some of its leading edge in electric vehicles can be transferred and applied to flying vehicles. For example, batteries used in eVTOL aircraft need to be lightweight and offer sufficient capacity, while China is the world’s large battery producer. In particular, the leading manufacturer Contemporary Amperex Technology (CATL) is working to address challenges brought by flying vehicles. Second, the government provides strong support for the industry. China aims to build demonstration areas for the low-altitude economy in the Pearl River Delta and the Yangtze River Delta by 2025, and the government has begun to consider approaches to airspace management as the drone and eVTOL sectors take off.
四、复盘规矩立规
- “交卷前专查谓语动词”硬性纪律：写完每段，眼睛立刻脱离中文意思，只用红笔圈出该段所有的谓语动词，核对：主语是单数还是复数？时态是否统一？（本篇如果做过这一步，至少可以挽回 6 分！）；
- 查句号防漏译：数一下中文原文有几句，英文译文有几句，严防段末最后一句彻底漏掉；
- 固定搭配肌肉记忆：
remind sb. of（绝不用 with）、seek sth.（绝不加 for）、large-scale production、airspace management。